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Hi John-

I'm interested in your thoughts about Stats/Media Kit. Please email me. my address is pete, here at freegeek with an org at the end :)

The main point though, is that the page you commented on is NOT intended primarily for the public, but for journalists. Nor is it intended as a "selling point" it will be the back page of the media kit, all the selling will be done within the prose. (Certain, more impressive statistics will be included there.) Please take a look at Media Kit/3Free, which will become the first page of the media kit (with a little modification still to come.)

Please email me, or call 503-453-9766.

-Pete

Thanks!

Hey John, thanks for your edits of the "3Free" page. I went back in and rewrote some things too. In a couple cases, I realized from your edits that I was trying to incorporate too many ideas in too little space, and just cut out concepts entirely, to improve the flow.

Anyway, I really appreciate your feedback. Everyone who has looked at it has brought up different things. It's really helped me as a writer, and I'd like to think the final piece will reflect that.

-Pete 23:30, 14 Apr 2006 (PDT)